Actually, could you put extra cheese on mine?

How to say “Actually, could you put extra cheese on mine?” in Japanese

In Japanese

やっぱり、私(わたし)のはチーズ多(おお)めにしてもらえますか？

Yappari, watashi no wa chīzu ōme ni shite moraemasu ka?

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