Anyone fancy watching the match in the common room while we wait for dinner?

How to say “Anyone fancy watching the match in the common room while we wait for dinner?” in Japanese

In Japanese

夕飯(ゆうはん)まで、談話室(だんわしつ)で一緒(いっしょ)に試合見(しあいみ)ない?

Yūhan made, danwashitsu de issho ni shiai minai?

Anyone fancy watching the match in the common room while we wait for dinner? in other languages