Are we allowed to board yet, or is the driver still checking tickets?

How to say “Are we allowed to board yet, or is the driver still checking tickets?” in Japanese

In Japanese

もう乗(の)っていいの?それとも、まだ運転手(うんてんしゅ)さんが切符(きっぷ)を確認(かくにん)してる?

Mō notte ii no? Soretomo, mada untenshu-san ga kippu o kakunin shiteru?

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