Can I raise a concern about our holiday plans?

How to say “Can I raise a concern about our holiday plans?” in Japanese

In Japanese

休(やす)みの旅行(りょこう)の計画(けいかく)について、ちょっと気(き)になる点(てん)を挙(あ)げてもいい?

Yasumi no ryokō no keikaku ni tsuite, chotto ki ni naru ten o agete mo ii?

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