Can you ask them to slice the ham a bit thicker this time?

How to say “Can you ask them to slice the ham a bit thicker this time?” in Japanese

In Japanese

今度(こんど)は、ハムをあんまり薄(うす)く切(き)らないでって頼(たの)んでくれる？

Kondo wa, hamu o anmari usuku kiranai dette tanonde kureru?

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