Could my daughter spend a few minutes in the small animal room before we choose a hamster?

How to say “Could my daughter spend a few minutes in the small animal room before we choose a hamster?” in Japanese

In Japanese

ハムスターを選(えら)ぶ前(まえ)に、娘(むすめ)が小動物(しょうどうぶつ)の部屋(へや)で少(すこ)し見(み)て回(まわ)ってもいいですか？

Hamusutā o erabu mae ni, musume ga shōdōbutsu no heya de sukoshi mite mawatte mo ii desu ka?

Could my daughter spend a few minutes in the small animal room before we choose a hamster? in other languages