Could this conditioner help with brittle hair?

How to say “Could this conditioner help with brittle hair?” in Japanese

In Japanese

このコンディショナーで、切(き)れやすい髪(かみ)も少(すこ)しはましになるかな？

Kono kondishonā de, kireyasui kami mo sukoshi wa mashi ni naru kana?

Could this conditioner help with brittle hair? in other languages