Could you annotate that page with the timings from today's batch? Mine turned out too dark.

How to say “Could you annotate that page with the timings from today's batch? Mine turned out too dark.” in Japanese

In Japanese

今日(きょう)の分(ぶん)の時間(じかん)を、そのページに書(か)き込(こ)んでくれる？私(わたし)のは焼(や)き色(いろ)が濃(こ)くなりすぎた。

Kyō no bun no jikan o, sono pēji ni kakikonde kureru? Watashi no wa yakiiro ga koku narisugita.

Could you annotate that page with the timings from today's batch? Mine turned out too dark. in other languages