Has the pilot sent a revised flight plan, or are we still waiting?

How to say “Has the pilot sent a revised flight plan, or are we still waiting?” in Japanese

In Japanese

操縦士(そうじゅうし)から修正版(しゅうせいばん)の飛行計画書(ひこうけいかくしょ)、もう届(とど)いた？それともまだ待(ま)ってる？

Sōjūshi kara shūseiban no hikō keikakusho, mō todoita? Soretomo mada matteru?

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