How to say “My rabbits refused this rabbit food, so I've brought the packet back.” in Japanese

In Japanese

うちの子(こ)たち、このウサギの餌(えさ)を食(た)べてくれなくて、袋(ふくろ)ごと持(も)ってきたんです。

Uchi no kotachi, kono usagi no esa o tabete kurenakute, fukuro goto motte kita n desu.

My rabbits refused this rabbit food, so I've brought the packet back. in other languages