How to say “People actually came home in that space capsule? It splashed down looking like a burnt marshmallow!” in Japanese

In Japanese

あの宇宙(うちゅう)カプセルに本当(ほんとう)に人(ひと)が乗(の)ってたの？着水(ちゃくすい)したとき、焦(こ)げたマシュマロみたいに真(ま)っ黒(くろ)だったよ！

Ano uchū kapuseru ni hontō ni hito ga notteta no? Chakusui shita toki, kogeta mashumaro mitai ni makkuro datta yo!