Shall we try that optical store, or have you already booked an eye test somewhere else?

How to say “Shall we try that optical store, or have you already booked an eye test somewhere else?” in Japanese

In Japanese

あの眼鏡屋(めがねや)に行(い)ってみる？それとも、もう別(べつ)のところで視力検査(しりょくけんさ)の予約(よやく)した？

Ano meganeya ni itte miru? Soretomo, mō betsu no tokoro de shiryoku kensa no yoyaku shita?

Shall we try that optical store, or have you already booked an eye test somewhere else? in other languages