How to say “She gave me a sympathetic smile when I told her the bad news.” in Japanese

In Japanese

悪(わる)い知(し)らせを伝(つた)えると、彼女(かのじょ)は思(おも)いやりのある笑顔(えがお)を見(み)せてくれました。

Warui shirase o tsutaeru to, kanojo wa omoiyari no aru egao o misete kuremashita.

She gave me a sympathetic smile when I told her the bad news. in other languages