This bus interior smells of wet coats; could we open a window?

How to say “This bus interior smells of wet coats; could we open a window?” in Japanese

In Japanese

車内(しゃない)、濡(ぬ)れたコートのにおいがするね。窓(まど)、開(あ)けてもらえる？

Shanai, nureta kōto no nioi ga suru ne. Mado, akete moraeru?

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