Those sunglasses looked darker in the display; could I try them near the window?

How to say “Those sunglasses looked darker in the display; could I try them near the window?” in Japanese

In Japanese

そのサングラス、ショーケースの中(なか)だともっと色(いろ)が濃(こ)く見(み)えたんですけど、窓際(まどぎわ)でかけてみてもいいですか？

Sono sangurasu, shōkēsu no naka da to motto iro ga koku mieta n desu kedo, madogiwa de kakete mite mo ii desu ka?

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