Will my backpack fit on the train luggage rack, or should I keep it under my seat?

How to say “Will my backpack fit on the train luggage rack, or should I keep it under my seat?” in Japanese

In Japanese

このリュック、荷物棚(にもつだな)に収(おさ)まるかな。それとも座席(ざせき)の下(した)に置(お)いたほうがいい？

Kono ryukku, nimotsudana ni osamaru kana. Soretomo zaseki no shita ni oita hō ga ii?

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