Would a darker ring cushion make the diamond easier to see?

How to say “Would a darker ring cushion make the diamond easier to see?” in Japanese

In Japanese

もっと濃い色(こいいろ)のリングクッションにしたら、ダイヤが見(み)やすくなるかな？

Motto koi iro no ringu kusshon ni shitara, daiya ga miyasuku naru kana?

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